Sequel to my last piece, Discussion. You all can discuss the implied reasons for the titles.
Still not done. I'm uploading this because I've been staring at this same screen for the last 5 hours. All total, I think I've worked on this piece for about 45-50 hours.
I need feedback. I can't see problems anymore with this piece. Its all glazed over to a sort of dull existence. If you comment, then it better be telling me what I can do better. If you leave a pointless 5-8 words that basically says, "That r0x0rz", then don't even bother.
That said, constructive feedback is more than welcome. Faves are always cool too.